I like the mystery of it I'm just thinking that the copy seems to be too close to the photography...I don't know why maybe that's where the padding for the website borders begin...I like the sparkles : )
I agree with who ever posted before me about the show description...an easy solution is probably move the image to the right just a few inches or less...that way it gives an interest of this person hiding behind the panels.
This image is cut off right, like at the right side, I'd say it looks like your trying to hide that fact, so I'd say the image looks kinda cramped in both sides of the image. My tip for you just blend in the image to the background, so it doesn't look cut off, and push over the type on the left, also the masque logo looks little small, just bump it up a little bit. It's a tiny detail.
I like this a alot, but the text is crowding the main image. I think if you down size the image a tad or shift it to the right, so its peeking out from behind the panels would be interesting.
I think the pinkish color should be switched for gold, cause for some reason the color is really jarring.
I like the mystery of it I'm just thinking that the copy seems to be too close to the photography...I don't know why maybe that's where the padding for the website borders begin...I like the sparkles : )
ReplyDeleteI agree with who ever posted before me about the show description...an easy solution is probably move the image to the right just a few inches or less...that way it gives an interest of this person hiding behind the panels.
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This image is cut off right, like at the right side, I'd say it looks like your trying to hide that fact, so I'd say the image looks kinda cramped in both sides of the image. My tip for you just blend in the image to the background, so it doesn't look cut off, and push over the type on the left, also the masque logo looks little small, just bump it up a little bit. It's a tiny detail.
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I like this a alot, but the text is crowding the main image. I think if you down size the image a tad or shift it to the right, so its peeking out from behind the panels would be interesting.
ReplyDeleteI think the pinkish color should be switched for gold, cause for some reason the color is really jarring.
Looks good though :)
^^ that was from Janai
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